外研版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 Module 3 写作能力提升练 (3).pptVIP

**写作实践实战演练Module3Lifenowandthen写作能力提升练某英文报社举办“家乡让我没想到”的主题文稿征集活动，记录百姓眼中的家乡“现在”与“过去”相比发生的变化。请你结合下面的图示信息，以“Whatmyhometownsurprisesme”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇英语短文向报社投稿。要求:词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。WhatmyhometownsurprisesmeInalltheseyears,myhometown,asasmallpartofChina,hashadgreatchanges,whichhavesurprisedmealot._________________________［审题指导］1.体裁:说明文2.人称:第一、三人称3.时态:以一般现在时为主［思路构建］WhatmyhometownsurprisesmeInalltheseyears,myhometown,asasmallpartofChina,hashadgreatchanges,whichhavesurprisedmealot.Firstly,theroadsweren’tascleanorsmoothastheyarenow.Thereusedtoberubbishontheroadsandotherpublicareas.Nowpeoplehavedevelopedthehabitofthrowingrubbishintobinssothecitylookscleanerandmorebeautiful.［精彩范文］Secondly,peoplearefriendlierthanbefore.Thirdly,thetrafficismuchbetterthanbefore.Whensomeoneisabouttocrossthestreet,thedriverwillstopandwait.I’mpleasedwithallthechangesinmyhometownandI’mproudofbeingamemberofit.Iwillworkharderinthefuturetomakeitabetterplace.1.采用“总—分—总”结构，思路清晰。2.连接词“firstly,secondly,thirdly”的使用，使文章逻辑性强。3.亮点词汇developthehabitof,bepleasedwith,beproudof等为文章添彩。4.高分句型:Firstly,theroadsweren’tascleanorsmoothastheyarenow.(notas...as句型的正确使用为文章加分）高分点评：你将参加学校英语社团征文比赛，主题是“Mychanges”，请你写一写从初一到现在你的变化吧。提示内容及要求如下：提示:1.Whatdidyouusetobelike?2.Whatareyourchanges?要求:不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MychangesTimegoesby.Twoandahalfyearshaspassed.OfcourseIhavechangedalot.Letmeshowyoumychanges.【思路点拨】第一步，先总写自己有了很大变化；第二步，分别叙述自己在