英语四级写作典范文及点评：笔记本电脑进校园影响与应用.pdfVIP

电脑科技的发展体现在社会生活的方方面面，教育作为创造智慧的第一生产线也受到了这种

普遍趋势的影响。笔记本电脑已经悄悄进军大学校园。

LaptopsEnterintoCampus

Laptopcomputersarepopularallovertheworld.Peopleusethemeverywhere.

Theyconnectpeopletotheirworkce.IntheUnitedStatestoday,laptopsalso

connectstudentstotheirclassrooms.

WestlakeCollegeinVirginiawillstartalaptopcomputerprogramallowing

studentstostudyschoolworkanywheretheywant.Withinfiveyears,eachofthe

1500studentsatthecollegewillreceivealaptop.Thelaptopsareapartofa

$10millioncomputerprogramatWestlake.Studentswithlaptopswillalsohave

accesstotheInternet.①Inaddition,theywillbeabletousee-mailto“speak”

withtheirteachers,classmates,orfamilies.②However,themostimportantpart

oftheprogramisthatstudentswillbeabletousecomputerswithoutgoingto

computerlabs.Theycanworkwithitanywheretheylike!

Becauseofthemanychangesincomputertechnology,laptopuseinhigher

educationisworkable.Aslaptopsbecomemorepowerful,theybecomemoresimilar

todesktopcomputers.Inaddition,portablecomputerscanconnectstudentstonot

onlytheInternet,butalsolibrariesandotherresources.Statehighereducation

sarestudyinghowlaptopscanhelpstudents.

AtWestlakeCollege,morethan60percentofthestaffusesthecomputers.

Thelaptopswillallowallteacherstousecomputersintheirsons.AsoneWestlake

teachersaid,“HereweareinthemiddleofVirginiaandwe’regivingstudents

awindowontheworld.Theycanseeeverythinganddoeverything.”

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行文点评

本文结构简明：理论+实例+理论+实例。首段首句直接点题，从而引出论点。随后非常

自然地引出笔记本电脑在的发展，为第二段有关韦斯特莱克大学的实例埋下了伏笔。

第二段通过对韦斯特莱克大学的笔记本电脑计划的具体解析，阐明了笔记本电脑在学生学习

中的重要作用。又在第三段中提出笔记本电脑在高等教育中应用的可行性。第四段再举

实例并总结收拢全文。

本文语言平实，思路清晰，注重理论与实际相结合，有理有据，列举数字，