人教版2019高一英语必修二基础知识求助信Word版含答案.docVIP

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求助信

假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:

1.剧情简介;

2指导内容;

3.商定时间地点。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.结束语已为你写好。

文思梳理

该篇写作属于书信中的求助信,命题形式为提纲式。求助信是针对自己目前遇到的

困难而写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型。其结构通常为:

1开门见山,表明求助意图(针对陌生对象要自我介绍)

2求助事由

3期盼回复并表示感谢

本篇求助信的主题是请外教帮忙修改英语短剧。根据题干信息及所给要点可列出提纲

第一段:说明写这封邮件的目的(请求外教帮忙指导,并让对方知晓请求的内容);

第二段:详细介绍英语短剧的剧情并指出需指导的细节问题;

第三段:表达感谢,并期待早日得到回复。

要点1求助意图

1.Howiseverythinggoing?ImwritingtoaskforyourassistancewithourdramaadaptedfromTheMillionPoundBankNote./ImwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingashortplayweadaptedaccordingtotheEnglishtextbook.

2.MyclassmatesandIhaveadaptedastoryfromourEnglishtextbookforashortplayrecently.Couldyougiveussomeadviceonhowtoimproveit?Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.

要点2剧情简介

WrittenbyMarkTwain,TheMillionPoundBankNoteisaboutapoormanwhounexpectedlyreceivesamillionpoundbanknotefromtworichgentlemen.

要点3指导内容

1.However,theadaptionisquitechallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedontwantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay,Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessaryrevisions?

2.Wehopethatyoucangiveussomeadvice/guidance/directiononhowtomakedialoguesbasedonthetextbook.

3.Wouldyoupleasehelpuspolishthelanguage?

4.Wewouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldtake/setasidesometimetowatchourrehearsal/performance/practiceandgiveussomeadvice.

5.IknowbeforecomingtoChinayouwereaninstructorofaschooldramaclub,soIwonderifyoucouldteachushowtoreadthescriptclearlyandgestureproperlyonthestage.

6.GivenyourbusyscheduleIdbeveryappreciativeifyouarewillingtogivesomeprofessionaladvice.

要点4商定时间和地点

1.Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisittoyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyou

moredetails?

2.Ifpossible,couldImeetyouinyourofficeat5pmthisFriday?

3.Ma