模块ⅦUnit2创新作文.pptVIP

【写作任务】根据题目《师父被熏晕过去了》的漫画和下面要求写一篇关于河水污染的感想。1．情况；2.原因；3.后果；4.措施。词数：120左右。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】1．单幅图作文需要在理解的基础上，结合提示发挥自己的合理想像，所表达的内容有头有尾，有条有理。2．本文的三个层次(1)陈述图画所表达的某一天所发生的事，用过去时为主；(2)陈述发生该事件“师父被熏晕过去了”的原因，用过去时；(3)针对“后果”，人们和政府采取什么措施和作者有何希望，以现在时为主。

【词汇热身】1．walk________ariver涉水过河2．fell________thehorse掉下马3．pourwastewaterandrubbish________theriver往河里倾倒污水和垃圾4．take________todosth.采取措施做……5．makerivers________净化河流【答案】1.across2.off3.into4.measures/steps5.clean

【一句多译】1．他们发现河水太臭以至于难以呼吸。①________________________________________________________________________②________________________________________________________________________

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【范文内化】OnedaySunWukongtogether_with_his_Master_and_brothers_was_walking①acrossariver.SuddenlyhisMasterfelloffthehorsebythebadsmellofriverwater.Theyfoundthewaterso_dirty_that②theycouldhardlybreathe.

Alotoffactoriesalongtheriveralwayspouredtheirwastewaterandrubbishstraightintotheriverwhichmadetheriverwaterpolluted.Inthiswaymostofthefishintheriverwerekilled.Iftheriverwateralloverthecountryispollutedlikethis，nolivingthingswillexistinthewater.Nowmoreandmorepeoplehave_come_to_realize③howseriousthisproblemis.Ourgovernmentisdoing_its_best_to_take_measures_to_fight_against_pollution.④Weexpectthatthewaterineveryriverwillbemadecleaner_and_cleaner⑤beforelong.

【名师点评】①介词短语运用恰当。②结果状语从句。③cometodo渐渐地……。④连续三个短语动词使用很到位。⑤比较级连用“越来越……”。