2023年英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析.pdfVIP

英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析

Abouthalfoftheinfantandmaternaldeathsindevelopingcountriescould

beavoidedifwomenhadusedfamilyplanningmethodstopreventhighrisk1

pregnancies,accordingtoareportpublishingrecentlybytheJohnsHopking2

University.

Thereportindicatesthat.6millioninfantdeathsand2,000,900maternal

Deathscouldbepreventedthisyearifwomenchosetohavetheirschildren3

within(hesafestyearswithadequateintervalsamongbirthsandlimitedtheir4

familiestomoderatesize.

Thisamountstoabouthalfofthe9.8millioninfantand370,D00matemal

deathsindevelopingcountries,excludedChina,estimatedforthisyearby

theUnitedNationsChildrentsFundandtheUSCentersforDiseaseControl

respcctably.Chinawasexcludedbecauseveryfewbirthsoccurinthehigh6

riskcategories.

Thereportsaysthatevidencesfromaroundtheworldshowstheriskof7

maternalorinfantillanddeathisthehighestinfourspecifictypesof8

pregnancy;pregnanciesbeforethemotheris18yearold;thoseafterthe9

motheris3yearsold;pregnanciesafterfourbirths;andthoselesserthan10

twoyearsapart.

参照答案及解析：

1将hadused改为usedo

由于此句是虚拟语气，表达与目前事实相反，故件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如:

Manywouldbewiseiftheydidnotthinkthemselveswise.许多人原本会成为聪颖人一假如他

们不自认为聪颖口勺话。

2将publishing改为published

report和publish时逻辑动宾关系，故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰reporto例如：

Anydiscoverythatwemaymake,howeversmall,willremainacquiredknowledge.任何也许的I发

现，不管多么微局限性道，都将成为知识宝库中U勺一部分。

3将theirs改为their

4将among改为between

在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间，故用between.

将过去分词excluded改为介词excluding。

excluding意为不包括…”

6将respectably改为respectively

respectiv