高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练12.pptxVIP

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练12片段描写:环境烘托动作衔接心理描写情节转折

1.高分句式：Themoment+时间触发点,环境细节（感官描写）2.高分句式：With+环境名词+doing/done,主语+动作（伴随场景）环境烘托

sceneone_________________________________________,thewindinthemountainssurgedoverwiththefragranceofpineneedles,coolingthesweatontheboy’sforehead.Themoment+时间触发点,环境细节（感官描写）Themomentthesunsetbrushedpastthemountaintop夕阳刚掠过山顶，山间的风就裹着松针的清香涌来，把少年额角的汗都吹凉了。环境烘托

scenetwo__________________________________________________,thegirltightenedherscarfagainandquickenedherstepstowardsthecabinwithalitlight.With+环境名词+doing/done,主语+动作（伴随场景）月光洒在积着薄雪的路面上，女孩把围巾又紧了紧，加快脚步向亮着灯的小屋走去。Withthemoonlightspillingontheroadcoveredwiththinsnow环境烘托

段落一Tomhadbeenhikinginthemountainsfortwohourstopickwildberriesforhissickgrandma.HisT-shirtwassoakedwithsweat,andhislegsfeltheavyasheclimbedthelastslope.(1)__________________________(夕阳刚掠过山顶),thewindinthemountainssurgedoverwiththefragranceofpineneedles,coolingthesweatontheboy’sforehead.(2)__________________________________(他深吸一口气),feelingthetirednessfadealittle,andquickenedhispace—heknewgrandmawouldbewaitingforhimathome.practice…ThemomentthesunsetbrushedpastthemountaintopHetookadeepbreath

段落二Afterfinishinghereveningclassatthevillageschool,Lucywalkedaloneonthewayhome.Theskywasdark,andtheroadwasquietexceptforthecrunchofsnowunderhershoes.(1)__________________________________(月光洒在积着薄雪的路面上),thegirltightenedherscarfagainandquickenedherstepstowardsthecabinwithalitlight.Shesmiled(2)__________________________________(想到妈妈会准备好的热粥)hermomwouldhaveprepared—tonight’scoldseemedeasiertobear.Withthemoonlightspillingontheroadcoveredwiththinsnowpractice…whenshethoughtofthewarmporridge

1.高分句式：Hardlyhad主语+done...when+连贯动作（倒装强调）2.高分句式：主语+reachedouttodo...onlytofindthat+意外结果（动作转折）动作衔接

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