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2025年上海中考英语写作优秀范文

书面表达题目：

假如你是李华，现在有三个英语项目化小组正在招新。请选择一组，写一封申请信。信中需要说明你的优势和选择理由，并提出一条建议。

Project-basedLearningGroup

Doeshealthyfoodbringhealth?

Doeslisteningtomusichelpstudy?

Arebookswithhappyendingsmorepopular?

范文一：

Dearleader,?

I’mwritingtoapplytojoinGroupB,whichdiscusseswhetherlisteningtomusichelpsstudy.SinceI’velongbeeninterestedinthistopic,Iwanttosharemyrealexperiences.WhenIfeeltiredfromdoinghomework—especiallywhenI’mdoingmathexercises—lightclassicalmusicalwaysmakesmerelaxquickly.Itcalmsmybusymind,liftsmymood,andevenhelpsmestayfocusedlonger.Iregularlykeepasmallnotebooktorecordmusicthatimprovesmystudyefficiency,andI’meagertosharethislistandtipsonchoosingsuitablemusicwiththegroup.Mysuggestionis:let’sdoasmallsurveytofindoutwhatmusicclassmatespreferwhilestudying,thencollecttheirfeedbacktomakeourdiscussionmoreuseful.?

Yours,?

LiHua

好单词?

apply(v.)申请|搭配：applytojoin（申请加入）?

discuss(v.)讨论|搭配：discussatopic（讨论话题）?

relax(v.)放松|搭配：relaxquickly（快速放松）?

focus(v.)集中注意力|搭配：stayfocused（保持专注）?

share(v.)分享|搭配：sharetips（分享技巧）?

suggestion(n.)建议|搭配：giveasuggestion（提建议）??

experience(n.)经历|搭配：realexperiences（真实经历）?

especially(adv.)尤其|搭配：especiallywhen（尤其当……时）?

mathexercises(n.)数学练习题

stay(v.)保持|搭配：stayfocused（保持专注）?

eager(adj.)渴望的|搭配：beeagertodo（渴望做某事）?

suitable(adj.)合适的|搭配：suitablemusic（合适的音乐）

collect(v.)收集|搭配：collectfeedback（收集反馈）?

feedback(n.)反馈|搭配：collectfeedback（收集反馈）?

useful(adj.)有用的|搭配：moreuseful（更有用的）

好句子

SinceI’velongbeeninterestedinthistopic,Iwanttosharemyrealexperiences.?

结构：since引导的原因状语从句+主句?

用法：“since”表“因为”，比“because”更自然，适合引出申请动机；“realexperiences”让理由更真实。?

WhenIfeeltiredfromdoinghomework—especiallywhenI’mdoingmathexercises—lightclassicalmusicalwaysmakesmerelaxquickly.?

结构：时间状语从句+破折号（补充具体场景）+主句?

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