初二勤思寒假写作课件：历与感悟.pptx

LESSON4寒假·勤思班

WRITING

Whatisit?

Canyoufindsomesamepoints?

生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法……现在，某英文报纸就分享话题征文，请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。

一过一现或现完一经历感受

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Variouspeoplehavedifferentkindsofsharingexperience,suchassharingafamousbook,abeautifulmelodyandsoon.Ialsohavesuchastory,whichleftagreatimpressiononbothmyfriendTom,andme.

Variouspeoplehavedifferentkindsofsharingexperience,suchassharingafamousbook,abeautifulmelodyandsoon...Leadin+ExamplesWhatelsecanyoushare?homeworklearningskillsice-creamlocalfood

...Ialsohavesuchastory,whichleftagreatimpressiononbothmyfriendTom,andme.Usethecomplexsentences.TransitionIalsohavesuchastory.Thestoryleftagreatimpressionon...定语从句Youcanalsochangethissentenceinto...eg.IalsohavesuchawonderfulmemorythatIcantwaittoshareitwithyou.

Introduction1.Haveyoueverhadanexperienceofsharing?2.Ihadanexperienceofsharing.3....leavesthestrongestimpressiononme.4.Themostimpressivethingformeis...5.Whatimpressesmethemostis...

AfterenteringGrade8,wefacedanewchallenge-physics.Tomshowednointerestinitatall.Asaresult,hefailedintheexam.Hefeltabitdowninthedumpsbuthedidntgiveup.Inordertoconquerthedifficulty,heaskedmeforhelp.Withoutasecondthought,Isharedmyownlearningskillswhichturnedouttobeusefultohim.Fromthenon,hebegantodevelopaninterestinphysics,andgainsomeconfidenceinstudy.BackgroundDevelopmentHappyending（when）（what）（reason）（result）（feeling）（decision）（action）（action）（result）

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