北京第二外国语大学英语翻译硕士考研资料—中国人口与发展-汉译英练习10.pdfVIP

六年专注考研专业课辅导 中国人口与发展-汉译英练习 10 Through 30 years’ efforts, we managed to step out a path suiting to our national conditions to deal with the issue 批注 [U1]: 字面翻译，不符合英文习 concerning population. We gradually established the system for population control and mechanism for family 惯 planning which can fully meet the demands of the market economy. Meanwhile we have achieved world 批注 [U2]: 要用Of ，concern 这个词能 renowned progress in greatly improving people’s rights to life, development, economy, society as well as culture. 随便乱用 The excessive growth of the population has been brought under control with the growth rate and natural growth rate of population being reduced to 15.23% and 8.77% in 1999 from 33.43% and 25.83% in 1970 respectively and 批注 [U3]: 紧贴字面翻译，太硬。 the fertility rate being lower than replacement level. Hence, china has become a country of a low fertility level . 批注 [U4]: 信息不全。没必要删去。 Though our economy is still undeveloped, we successfully transformed our population reproduction pattern featuring high birth rate, low mortality rate, high growth rate to a one featuring low birth rate, low mortality rate and low growth rate within a short period of time while some developed countries spent ten years or even hundreds of years to finish. T his indeed is a great historical change. 批注 [U5]: 句子准确性有待商榷 We have made great strides in education, public health and other social undertakings. By the end of 2000, we