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根据考情，本文档标注的预测中的大作文一般是不用看了，更新的大作文都会放在大作文部分的最后面。 注：本文档大作文范文建议从最后面P.58往回找 200909121726版本新增范文放最后面P.58。 200909172608版同于200909121726,200909260810新增范文放在最后页P.61,200910081024版同于200909260810版,20091024311107版新增见后面P.64（删除了10月8日预测中的题目，调整了第15，16，23题） 最好所有内容都看，时间比较少的同学请直接看本VIP包里面那篇简捷版A类大作文范文写法 雅思A类小作文每次考试都是全新的具体题目，只能预测题型。 10.24/31/10，11-12月小作文重点排列应该是 一级重点：饼图-柱状图 -表格 -曲线 二级：饼图-柱状图-表格-曲线的综合图 三级：地图 5%,流程图一般不会考（9.26刚考完）. 以上题型此VIP包范文完整版里面都有详细题目，范文，写法，套句素材。 I.2009预测A类大小作文范文及写法指导P. II.新增加的A大作文及范文 III.最新增加A类大作文 IV.A类小作文（综合图图表范文在后面，为此黑色，新增的为鲜红色-3篇：双饼图，一篇流程图范文，最后页综合图，） Ⅰ.2009预测A类大作文范文及写法指导 大作文中考官对你的文章会特别关注两个方面：一个是文章的段落安排。以前考官不会去关注文章的分段或层次，比如说你可以写一段超过 100字的段落，其实最合理的段落字数分配应是30-60-60-60-30之类的文章，当然根据题型需要段落数可以不同，但是建议考生的opening 和ending段不用写太多的字数。第二，考官对大作文评分标准的第二点CQ(Communicative Quality)也十分严格，中国考生的文章往往让老外看得很累，原因是没有topic sentence的习惯，没有clear opinion的习惯，这其实是缺乏做outline的习惯，一篇观点清晰、表达明确的文章每一段的发展过程应是Topic sentence+2(3) Supporting sentences + Minor example + Flow-back sentence（八股），这样的表达是最高效的。 大作写法：八股格式+有说服力的论证内容（正反，举例，假设，因果。。。）+丰富的语法和词汇（现在分词做状语，only倒装句，简单一重的定语从句，条件句，虚拟语气，同义词替换） 1. 版本a-Over the past 50 years, young people gain status and power but old people have lost. What is the cause and is it a good development or bad development? The knowledge-based society witnessed great changes over the past decades. Many young people have taken the place of the old ones and gained political and financial power in the world. Bill Gates, the director of Microsoft, Tony Blaire, Prime Minister of Britain and Bush, President of the USA give us vivid illustration. From my point of view, the trend is natural and inevitable. (63 words) Young people are energetic and vigorous. Most of them have received formal education in university, where they acquired abundant knowledge and experience, which are quite essential to their future career. Compared with young people, old peoples knowledge is out-dated, which does not fit in with the development of the current society. Old people react more slowly than young people, who ca