【优化设计】2014高考英语 Unit5 The power of nature基础梳理训练 新人教版必修5.docVIP

Unit 5　The power of nature 一、导语??? What does beauty really mean？ Everybody has own definition. The standard of beauty changes with different society， culture and nations. Some hold the point that the beautiful appearance is of great importance， which is visible to all. Others have the idea that the spiritual beauty is the loveliest one, which lasts long. However different it might be， their opinions are all acceptable.??? 什么是美呢？每个人都有自己的定义。美的标准因社会、文化和国度不同而产生差异。有的人认为相貌上的美是最重要、最直观的美，有的人则认为心灵上的美才是最可爱、最长久的美。无论哪种美，这些对美的定义都是有道理的。??? ??? 二、创设情境??? 以“What is beauty in your mind”为主题，发表自己的看法，题目自拟。要求：1. 行文流畅，观点鲜明；2. 内容丰富，层次分明；3. 词数150左右。 ??? 三、学生习作 ????????????????????????????????? Beauty will buy no beef??? Everyone admires beauty. Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made？If so， everybody can get beauty. As a result，there is no beauty at all.??? The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world. Everyone should value it. I’d ①rather prefer nature as the standard of beauty. Just accept yourself, accept everything the god gives to you，and create the beautiful life ②belong to you.??? Many heroes don’t have beautiful surface. However，their beautiful images often come to our minds. Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society. ??? Don’t be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking，but with a broad and kind heart. ??? Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an old saying goes，“Virtue is fairer than beauty.”If you have a kind heart，you own real beauty.?? ?? 【点评】? 本文以谚语“漂亮不能当饭吃”为题，直截了当地亮出了自己的观点。全文以“美德胜于美貌”为主线，阐述了“追求外形的美而放弃了内在的美不是真正的美”。文章观点鲜明，结构严谨，用词恰当，作者能运用谚语来强化自己的观点，有较强的英语语言组织能力和表达能力。??? 本文有两处语言错误：① I’d rather prefer应改为? I’d prefer。would rath