2014届高考英语一轮复习提分指南：例谈高考英语作文“六步法”.docVIP

例谈高考英语作文“六步法” 新编《英语课程标准》和2002年《考试说明》都对英语的书面表达能力有基本的要求。要求学生根据情景写出百字左右的短文，其形式各异。根据以上的要求我们在平时的教学中采用了六步法的写作模式，收到了良好的效果。 ? 例（三）请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，词数100字左右。 ? 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为东方明珠。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。现在她已经回到祖国的怀抱，而且前景会更加美好。 ? 1）仔细审题：本文属于说明性文章。 ? ?2）理清要点： ? ? ???? （1）位置、面积和人口 ? （2）鸦片战争后香港的处境 ? （3）97年后回到祖国怀抱 ? （4）其前景美好 ? 生词：明珠 pearl 鸦片 opium ? ? ? ? ? 3）译写单句 ? ???? a) Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1045km2. Her population is more than 6 million. ? b) She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. ? c)In 1997 she returned to motherland. ? d)Her future is very beautiful. ? ?4）连句成篇 ? Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1045km2 and population is more than 6 million. ? She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997 she returned to motherland, and her future is very beautiful. ? ?5） 润色或文 ? Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. She has an area of 1045km2 and has a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as the Pearl of the East. ?In 1842, she was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the Opium War, and the people of Hongkong lived a hard life. ?In 1997, she returned to motherland, and the people of Hongkong are and will be working hard to make her more beautiful. ??? 6) 定稿誊写 ? Hongkong lies in the southeast of China. She has an area of 1045km2 and a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as the Pearl of the East. ? In 1842 the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hongkong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people of Hongkong suffered a lot. ? After the return of Hongkong to China in 1997, the people of Hongkong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.(89 words) ? 例（四）假如你叫张明。从《天津日报》看到某公司（石家庄）招聘一名英语秘书。根据启事请你用英语写封简短的应聘书寄往：石家庄1378信箱，说明你的履历。主要内容如下： ? ? 姓名 ?张明 ?年龄 ?25岁 ? 学历 ?南开大学毕业 ? 工作经历 ?从教英语3年 ? 爱好和兴趣 ?英语口语、书面语和文秘 ? 通讯处 ?南开大学101信箱 ? 写信时间 ?2002年10月29日 ? ???? ? ? 1