2012高考英语高中英语基础写作.pptVIP

基础写作 基础写作步骤 基础写作步骤 基础写作步骤 基础写作步骤 基础写作步骤 书面表达六步法 基础写作步骤 Find out the mistakes if any: 1.There are 40%of the students think that the English teacher have a class interesting and lively. 40% of the students think that the English teachers should have their classes interesting and lively. 错误诊断：there be 句型使用错误. 中国式英语 2.The teachers are young 、friendly and funny in our school have 28% students welcome them. 28% of the students welcome the teachers who are young 、friendly and humorous. 错误诊断： 多谓语现象 中国式英语 3.Many of the students like the teacher … Some of them like the teacher … Some like the teacher can know… And some like the teacher… 错误诊断：不能笼统地用many,some 来说明，要用数据来说明。 4.28% students think teacher must have young、friendly 、humour. 28% of students think the teachers must be young 、friendly 、humorous. 错误诊断：百分比和名词之间要用of, of之后的 名词要有the have 的用法 词性错误 And had 20% of students like the teacher kindness to everyone. 错误诊断：have的用法错误 As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife… Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were … Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were … 三. 基础写作实践 请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 1、 标题：Top Meal of the Day 2、 必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。 3、 将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。 原因：晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会。 结果：上课总想睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩不理想。 建议：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能量的30%， 青少年健康应从早餐抓起。 Some students study late into the night. They choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. As a result, they tend to be sleepy all day. They have bad memories. It is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of exams. As a matter of fact/In fact, morning meal play