高考英语开放性作文.ppt

* * 开放作文专题 练习 Mr. Li is the manager of a large company. He went back home late as usual one night. He found a note written by his only son, saying that he would leave home … You know the boy and tell us why: One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were playing in the woods when they found a bird on the ground. They picked it up and found it wounded. ?Suppose you are Li Hua and Wang Ping. Please tell us what you did with the bird 1、审语境 2、审人称 3、审时态: 一个星期六的下午，李华和王平在树林里玩，这时他们在地上发现一只小鸟，他们拣起小鸟，发现小鸟受伤了 Supposing you are Li Hua and Wang Ping. 从此句的提示中可以看出时要求你以李华和王平两个人的口气续写，因此人称就该we Please tell us what you did with the bird.在这个提示语中的did正是决定学生在写作中所用的时态应该是过去时 例1： ?If I were Li Hua I would try my best to save the bird. I would put the bird carefully into my soft hat to keep it warm. And then carried it to an animal hospital as soon as possible. I think doctor could help it. If the bird can live I would carry it back home, and took care of it until it can fly back to the woods. If it couldn’t live, I would buried it. I think whoever meet this thing will do just like what I did. Everybody would like to see this bird family live happily together, isn’t it? （审题错误） 例2： ? First find the wound of the bird quickly. Second, tidy the wound carefully and softly and remember not to make the bird pain a lot. Then put some medicine on it and tie a cloth around the wound 时态/句型不妥 ?例3： ?I was worried about the little bird when I had picked it up. Its leg was seriously hurt. So I decided to bring it to see the doctor. But Li Hua told me that the doctor couldn’t see the animals. At last we put it on a big tree, because we believed it could be safer in the woods than in the city. We hoped it could be better now 人称错误 例5： ? One day afternoon, Wang Ping and I were playing happily in the woods. We were playing balls and suddenly the ball ran into the other side of the road. I hurried to get it when I saw a bird lying there and I found it was wounded. We quickly took it to the hos