2009广东高考英语写作讲评.pptVIP

2009高考作文讲评 基础写作 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况： 时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息： (1)发生率：略高于50％ (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关 [写作内容] 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容： 1．采访的时间、对象和主题； 2．中小学生近视的发生率及人数； 3．专家解读。 [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 审题 1.文体： 2.人称： 3.时态： 4.整合信息： 5.单词和短语： 1.）近视n. 2.) 近视的adj. 3.)采访 4.）上周末 5.）原因 6.）复杂 7.）治愈 8.）过度用眼 9.）参加户外活动 10.）握笔 11.）与…有关 12.) 发生率略高于50%： 13.）专家解读： 参考范文 ? Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor about the issue of short-sightedness of the school children in China. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world. He also pointed that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness. So he suggested that school children should avoid overusing their eyes and should do more outdoor activities. He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness. Unit 7 读写任务 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia．All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining．You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off．That’s right--sleep it off．The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy． The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience．Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice ill