作文训练系列之图表作文(一).pptVIP

作文训练系列之图表作文(一) 图表作文有表格(table)、柱形图(bar chart)、饼状图(pie chart)和折线图(diagram)之分。一般情况下，都需要对图表进行描述，一般放在文章的第一部分，长度宜适中。 图表式作文形式多样，是一种控制性和应用性极强的出题方式，从写作类型来看，以说明文或议论文为主。考生要围绕题目并将有关信息转化为文字形式，这要求考生具有一定数据分析和材料归纳的能力，同时还需要运用一定的写作方法。对此类作文题一般以三段式写作方法来组织文章，即：第一段总结归纳信息反映的总的情况，点出主题思想；第二段对数字、数据等信息作出有条理的分析比较；第三段作出总结或加以简单评论。 思路点拨: 首先对图表进行分析，弄清其内容和性质，进而确定其体裁和结构；然后确定文章所用的时态；最后确定所用的人称。当然必要的过渡以及句式的变化也是非常必要的。 演示: 题目要求：假设你是李华。你将代表学校参加国际中学生论坛，就你所在城市的教育状况发表演讲。请根据以下两幅图表，介绍你市高中学生构成情况及毕业去向的选择，并针对两幅图中的任何一个数据所反映的情况发表自己的看法。 注意： 1．开头和结尾已给出。2．词数：100左右，不包括已给出部分。 3．参考词汇：non－local workers外来务工人员；vocational school职业学校 Ladies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. Im going to talk about the high school education of my city. I believe the future of the education in our city is promising! Thats all. Thank you. 审题: 1、体裁：图表式作文，为说明议论文体 2、主要时态：一般现在时 3、人称：第一,三人称 4、要点：说明议论文体，???? 关键词及短语： ① be honored to do sth. ② on behalf of ③ make up ④ intend to ⑤ according to ⑥ made more efforts ⑦ be happy to ⑧ 连接词: besides; and; for example, for one thing; for another 参考答案 Ladies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. Im going to talk about the high school education of my city. From chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. There are even 1 percent foreign students. According to chart 2, the students choices after graduation have presented a wider variety. Sixty percent of them intend to go to universities. Thirty percent choose to enter vocational schools, and the rest ten percent plan to go abroad for further studies. I think we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longe