初二写作指导(记叙文写作指导).doc

 ■Upon our arrival, we began to wipe the windows, and then we swept the floor. After that we made our own beds. After that, we went to the fruit yard and got down to work at once. Some of us picked apples and others loaded baskets of apples onto the trucks. We also helped with the corn harvest. We cut the corns off and piled them up. I felt it was great fun. On the last day, we gathered together in the open air to have a party, where we sang songs and danced happily. ■This was really an unforgettable experience for us all. ■Last term we went to Miyun to work on the farm. ■Upon our arrival, we were divided into groups of four and each group shared one room. All by ourselves, we wiped the windows, swept the floor and made the bed ■(交代时间人物地点)As soon as we finished the cleaning, we walked to the fruit yard and helped the farmers with the harvest. ■(交代动作)Some of us were picking apples with baskets; Some were carrying the baskets, which is really a strenuous task for some of the girls ; Others were busy loading the truck with the apples. ■(交代矛盾心情)Fortunately enough, we finished all of the work before sunset ■(交代心情)and marched happily to our dorm ■(交代时间)The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the field, the farmers had already started their harvest. ■(动作进行)Without any delay, we picked up the tools, joined them and helped them with the corn harvest ■(矛盾冲突):To my surprise, there seemed to be loads of work waiting for us and when we finished it, it was already midnight. ■(人物心情): Although we felt tired, yet all of us were in quite a good mood for it was the first time that we had worked together in the field. ■(时间,地点,人物): On the last day of our departure, We all went out in the open air ■(心情)The weather was lovely outside and there was quite a cool breeze. We were feeling fairly cheerful. ■(动作)We were sitting in a circle, singing and dancing with great joy. ■(小议论)This was really an unforgettable experien