写作练习1.pptVIP

基础写作的评分标准如下： 1.内容的完整性：题目所列举的信息要表达完整，重点评判考生是否表达全部规定的内容，如果考生在表达完整的内容时，适当添加内容，不扣分。 2.用词的准确性：句子的表达要符合语法规范，用词准确（高级词汇），消除词汇障碍，注意某些热门话题的词汇积累，表达地道。 3.句子的复杂程度（句式的多样性），其中包括：并列复合句，主从复合句（定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）、非谓语动词、倒装句以及某些固定句型的使用。 4.篇章的连贯性：整段话是一个篇章，句子之间要衔接自然，能恰当地使用连词，不是单纯的翻译句子，连接成分能恰当使用，使语义顺连自然。 解题步骤： 1.信息划分：按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块：一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 2.列出关键词组和句型,保证表达的准确性; 3.串联句子:用正确的语法结构写出准确的句子,并形成篇章,注意连贯性; 4.审计检查:通读全文,从内容的是否全面,句子结构是否正确，遣词是否准确，文章是否连贯，过渡是否自然等方面进行修定检查。 You may begin like these: The passage is about… The writer tells us about… The story is about… The author tells us that… 1. Life in the future will be different from today’s. People will wear special clothing and eat various foods. Apart from living in mobile houses and going anywhere by plane, people can study and work online. 2. The passage tells us about the changes of our clothing, foods, houses, transportation and education in the future. Life in the future will be more convenient, comfortable and wonderful. 叙述类文章写作模板： 1. 标题 2. 概括[关于所读的短文的梗概 (约 30词)] 3. 过渡句 4. 记叙文 (关于同一主题的) [按题目内容要求] 5. 结束语[点题] The whole story Why Cut School? This article points out a common phenomenon --- playing truancy --- among students. It also gives us a picture of the forms truancy takes. Finally, it tells the attitude on the part of the schools. ( 33 words) The feeling of playing truancy is really bad. I must admit that I do cut school once in a while. Only last Friday, I missed two English classes on purpose and went home without telling anyone. With my parents away， I enjoyed myself watching TV.I felt really cool having a free time alone while the other poor children were learning the boring English classes. Why play truancy? School work sometimes is really too much and I want to get it off my mind. Besides，that English teacher of ours is really too hard on us and hardly any of us likes his class. Of course, when my teachers and my parents find out, I will be in trouble. I’m worried about my scho