实用阶梯英语—写作教程 unit 3 Topic Sentence.pptVIP

尚辅网 尚辅网 Objectives Students are expected to be able to (1) Understand the functions and the basic elements of a topic sentence for a paragraph (2) Write an appropriate topic sentence for a paragraph Summer Holiday—Example The classmates I interviewed had enjoyed their summer holiday very much with different activities. Some of them paid a visit to the 2010 Shanghai Expo to broaden their vision, while some classmates preferred to stay at home reading novels, watching movies or surfing the net to relax themselves. On the other hand, some classmates went to do some part-time job to earn some pocket money and working experience. On the whole, my classmates took different activities to make good use of their happy summer holiday. Writing Practice 1 Analysis of Sentence 1: XXX College is a 3A college. a. Subject: XXX College b. Controlling Idea: 3A college c. Limited: Yes d. Development: This sentence tells us a fact, which leaves us little to develop. Thus, this is not a good topic sentence. Writing Practice 1 Analysis of Sentence 2: XXX Polytechnic is beautiful. a. Subject: XXX College b. Controlling Idea: beautiful c. Limited: Yes d. Development: It is easy to develop this topic sentence. Beautiful environment of the college can be described to support the topic. Writing Practice 1 Analysis of Sentence 3: XXX Polytechnic is a good place. a. Subject: XXX College b. Controlling Idea: good place c. Limited: No, this is a broad statement, which is not easy to be developed in a certain direction. d. Development: We can narrow the sentence into “XXX College is a good place to study.” , then we can focus on “good to study”. * * * 尚辅网 Unit Three: Topic Sentence Writing 尚辅网 尚辅网 Warm-up Activity: My summer holiday How did you spend your summer holiday? Go travelling Preview for college study Do sports Read novels Do part-time job Surf the net Play computer game Sleep all day long … 尚辅网 Warm-up Activity: My summer holiday Do you wa