作文(总复习).pptVIP

* 四级作文评分标准 阅卷标准分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分，每一等都可上下浮动一分，各等的具体标准如下：　 14分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本 无语言错误。 11分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错 8分—基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错 误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 　 5分--基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严 重语言错误。　　 2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有 错误，且多数为严重错误。　　 2002年12月四级考试作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: It pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。 2. 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。 14 points:切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本 无语言错误。 Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams. Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won’t buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later. In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest. 11 points:切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错  Nowadays, many people choose not be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unnece