山西省永济市涑北中学高一英语《Writing》写作训练.docVIP

Learning Goals 1. Appreciate a beautiful passage about smoking . 2. Help to have a summary about the skills of writing. 3. Enable Ss to write a passage about “Mobile Phone” Learning Steps Step 1 A级要求(范文欣赏) 月考作文 What’s your attitude towards smoking? The opinions on smoking vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of smoking. They see smoking as an effective way to relax themselves. They also think that inspiration will come suddenly when they are smoking Moreover , they even consider it a symbol of intelligence and maturity. Meanwhile , others argue that smoking bring nothing but harm. They think that smoking is harmful to the health of smokers as well as those who are forced to be second-hand smokers .What’s worse, smoking pollutes the environment. As far as I am concerned , I’m firmly against smoking because not only is smoking bad for our body ,but also it is a waste of money. In a word , it’s time for us to stop smoking. Question: After reading this passage, what should we do? Step 2 B级要求(写作技巧总结) I．段落分布: _____________ II Key structures (关键句型) 1．The opinions on……vary from person to person. Different people have/hold different opinions about…… 2．Some people are in favor of (支持）… the idea that........ against(反对).... 3. As for as I am concerned,...... 4. In a word 5. see A as B=________________=_______________ 6. a symbol of 7. What’s worse What’ s more III. 过渡连接词： 1 Firstly /Secondly/ Finally 2. ①First of all ②Moreover, Besides What’s worse What’ s more ③Last but not least Step 3 C级要求 I（翻译句子） 1. 对于学生带手机到学校，人们观点各异。 __________________________________________________________________ 2. 70%的学生支持到手机到学校。 ___________________________________________________________________ 30%的学生反对带手机到学校. ___________________________________________________________________ 3.⑴一些学生认为带手机到学校是一种时尚和酷的标志。 _____________________________