如何增加文章的亮点.doc

如何增加文章的亮点 编写者：田星霞 审核人：蔡淑玲 Learning aims(学习目标):To improve ability of writing. Important points(学习重点): To learn some knowledge of organizing the passage. Difficult points(学习难点) :To learn some skills of writing, such as how to use advanced words and sentences and how to connect the sentences. Ⅰ、Lead in Read the following passage（2009福建卷）. Underline the beautiful words, phrases, sentences and conjunctions. There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible. First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and taken all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say Thank you to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life. In a word, lets greet everyday with a smile. Tomorrow is another day. Ⅱ、Some skills about how to beautify the writing. ⅰ、怎样使用较高级的词汇 观察思考：体会下列句子换词后的效果。 1. China is now in the primary stage of socialism. China is currently in the primary stage of socialism 2. The job is very difficult to do. The job is very challenging. 3. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 4. We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him. 反思：高级词汇是什么？_________________________________________ 巩固提高 1. Finally he saw the young man’s light overcoat in the distance. ___________________________________（catch） 2. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. _______________________________________________________(The more) 3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. ___________________________________(occur) 4. As a result the plan was a failure. ————————————————————————(turn out) 5. You can find my house easily. —————————————————