[中学联盟]江苏省江阴市成化高级中学高三复习课件：写作4.pptVIP

* 实战演练 Michael是一名美国中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步 了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语 把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一段短文，向他解释。 注意：1．词数：在80—120词之间； 2．参考词汇：bump into(撞上)，hoe(锄头) 存在问题: 1.缺乏想象力. 2.故事结局没写好. 3.文章第一句和结尾句相同. 4.刻意追求复杂句形. 5.图与图之间的逻辑联系不够紧密. 6.寓意偏差. 首尾句参考: Accidents may happen every day. A proverb says: No pains, no gain. No mill, no milk. No work, no pay. There is no free lunch in the world. There is no free meal in the world. 最难写的一句话: 思想活动: He thought to himself:“ … ”. 范文1: Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields everyday. One day , while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit by the trump. He picked it up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to himself, “Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all day long?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree everyday, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his fields, he found that all his crops were dead. This story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by trusting chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewards without hard work. 范文2: There was once a farmer who worked very hard every day. One day when he was hoeing in the sunshine, he suddenly heard a low sound “Peng”. He turned and hurried to the tree. He found a rabbit dying. He took hold of the rabbit and was very excited. “What a rabbit! I’ll have it for dinner!” Then he had a good idea, “Why can’t I wait for more rabbits here? It’s cool under the tree.” So he dropped off his hoe and waited there. But day after day, there were no more rabbits coming. What was worse, all his crops were dead.