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写作3第一次作业辅导资料 以下为三份不同成绩的作业样板。供大家写作时参考。但严禁任何形式的抄袭。 ? The Advantages of a Large College[BCMichael1] ? A large college has many advantages for international students. [BCMichael2]First of all, it[BCMichael3] has good [BCMichael4]facilities. The[BCMichael5] library is[BCMichael6] usually[BCMichael7] large[BCMichael8], so students can read more books and many kinds of [BCMichael9]periodicals. The laboratories are also big and advanced[BCMichael10]. Therefore students can do their high-standard research[BCMichael11]. Second, a large college offers many kinds of courses. Usually it [BCMichael12]has special programs for international students. Therefore, students have a wide choice of subject [BCMichael13]to take. It also has [BCMichael14]quality of[BCMichael15] ESL classes, so students abroad [BCMichael16]can get through [BCMichael17]their subject[BCMichael18] easily. [BCMichael19]Thirdly, professors in large colleges know how to teach international students well[BCMichael20]. They understand international students because most of them know foreign cultures[BCMichael21]. They also have [BCMichael22]taught lots[BCMichael23] of non-native students, so they have good[BCMichael24] experience[BCMichael25]. In addition, a large college may[BCMichael26] have plentiful[BCMichael27] activities[BCMichael28], so students can take part in one or another[BCMichael29]. It also provides more opportunities for on-campus jobs. [BCMichael30]Therefore[BCMichael31], students can earn some money to pay the [BCMichael32]expensive tuition. Finally, a large college [BCMichael33]usually locates in [BCMichael34]a[BCMichael35] large city, so the transportation is more convenient. All in all, a large college has more advantages for international students[BCMichael36] Overall Comment: While it may seem that I have made a lot of corrections in this student’s work, the student has made a good effort in their writing in terms of organization. There needed to have been a short introductory paragraph