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And I’m one among them. I plan to contribute to visiting Old People’s House and taking care of the sick children in hospital. Because I have a strong sense of responsibility to promote a better society. In addition, reviewing lessons to lay a good foundation is another thing I want to do because the entrance examination to senior school is drawing near. I’m sure I’ll get a lot during this vacation. 书面表达评分标准 第二档：（12-9分） 基本符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 Hi, Tony, I’m glad to hear from you. I did a survey about what my classmates usually do on winter vacation. Here is what I infered. During the class, there are about 20 students who don’t plan their vacation, so they will just stay at home do something they would like. Several students are going to volunteer, so do I. I will go to Old people’s house twice a week and sing for them. I’m a loving girl with a great interest in music, so it would make all of us happy. 二档文 …… I will also volunteer my time in an Animal Hospital. I do think it will be a good chance for me to put my love to good use. Besides, about 10 students will travel with their family. I am afraid that I won’t have this chance. If you have more questions, please ask me. Best wishes. 下阶段写作练习建议： 重点落实解题步骤 仔细审题 简列提纲 审查提纲 起草草稿 检查草稿 抄写文段 可选用表格形式或思维导图模式 关注人称，时态，句子基本结构 对于写作的几点计划 平时加强基本功的训练 （短语 句子 段落 文章） 总结一些例文中的好句子。 不同题材的文章有一些通用的句子。 同一个题目变换方式写。 平时在做阅读时做个有心人，摘抄好词好句。 写作应试技巧 要严格按所给提示来写,不丢项; 写好完整的句子是写作的基础和底线； 文章分三段，10句话； 用熟不用生； 表达思想清楚，积极向上; 社交能力不仅帮助你顺利地完成任务,还能帮助你维持良好的社交关系。 Communication skills will not only help you to accomplish things smoothly, but also help you maintain good social relationships. 合作和交流是你今后发展必要的社交能力。懂得如何得体地与人交流非常必要。 Cooperation and communication are necessary social abilities for your development. It’s very necessary for you to understand how to communicate with other people in a proper way. 这对你来说是建立耐心和责任心的好机会。 It’s a good opportunity for