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2014-2015学年高三英语一模汇编----写作 One【宝山】 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 目前，在网上购物的人越来越多，有人说在网上购物比在实体店购物优势多，有人说还是在实体店购物好。请写一篇文章阐明你的观点。你的文章必须包括： 简要介绍两种购物方式的不同之处 你喜欢那种购物方式？为什么？ 参考： Shopping online vs. shopping in physical stores As scientific technologies developed faster and faster, our common lives have changed more and more, one of which is our shopping way. We have been shopping in physical stores, where a salesman may introduce many products to you and give you some advice about which one is the best choice, and you can try those clothes or shoes in person, even change another one if you find it not suitable to yourself. However, a new shopping method sprang up --- shopping online. There appear quantities of various stores on the Internet. You just need to click your mouse, and then you can see different kinds of commodities in them, with colorful pictures and detailed descriptions. If you are not clear about something, you can ask the customer service staff for help, who usually very kind and glad to answer your any question. Moreover, you can compare the same kind of products in different stores at the same time, which is able to save your time and avoid embarrassment. But every coin has two sides. Shopping online is not exceptional, so there are some disadvantages. First, you can never be sure whether the product is exactly what you see in the picture or read in the descriptions. What you receive may be much different from what is in your mind, for instance, strange color, wrong size or bad quality. Secondly, the products may be lost in the express delivery. From my perspective, I prefer shopping online, because I am too busy to have time go shopping in physical stores and goods online are usually cheaper. But I always choose the shops which have good reputation. 【答案解析】文中包含题干的两个问题即可。 【教学建议】教授学生按照题干要求列出提纲，然后再写。 P.F. Productions后期制 Two【崇明】 II. Guided Writing Directions: Write an Englis