日记复习.pptVIP

Let’s write a diary What topics have we learnt to write about? Introduce ourselves Talk about our school and friends Our favourite food, pets, shops, clothes and festivals Our school life and our trouble Plan a day out Our abilities The world around us： Our home and neighbourhood The place(town) we live in How to get to a place wild animals(endangered animals) Join a Bird-watching Club Natural disasters Charity activities and charity organizations How to write a diary 写作要领 1 细读提示——明白写的内容是什么 2 写全要点——了解核心内容，非重要情节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。表格类原则上一个不能少 3 卷面干净——事先打草稿然后誊改是使文章通畅的关键 4 书写认真——不求文字隽秀力保规范工整，这是留下好印象的起码条件 5 层次分明——为使短文令人感到赏心悦目分成2甚至3段为好 6 承上启下——简而言之是连接词、过渡句他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带 7 繁简有度——文章总有详写与略写，尤其是 图画类短文，学会筛选是非常必要的. 8 亮点突出——较高级词汇和较复杂的语法结构的合理适时使用，这最能影响或打动改卷教师，是求得高档次及该档次高端分 值的保证 The main information and how to write this diary. Discuss: * * Teenage life Example:书面表达 2001年12月11日中国正式加人世贸组织（WTO)。初三(1)班全体学生听到这个消息非常高兴，第二天晚上举行了庆祝活动。请根据以下内容写一篇日记，词数60－80。开头已给出，不计入总词数。可能遇到的生词：特别（especially） 形式 英语晚会 时间 12月12日晚7：00－9：00 地点 本班教室 出席对象 英语教师、全班学生 内容 唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、做游戏等 感受 度过了一个愉快的夜晚；表示人世后要更加努力学好各门功课，特别是英语 We had an English party this evening in our class-room. The party began at 7 o clock and was over at 9. Our English teacher also came to the party. At the party some students sang and danced, some told interesting stories and some played games. We were very happy and had a good time. We all think we must try our best to learn all the subjects well, especially English after China entered the WTO. One possible version: Wednesday December 12,2001 Fine We were very glad to hear that China had entered the WTO. Try to write it down Can you try to write a diary today? *