中考英语作文讲评课(上海版).pptVIP

6. I will remembered that day forever. 10. In my father’s help, I became more patient than before. 16. We played snow in front of house. 22. He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart. How should we check the passage? 1. 查主题，文章是否符合题目要求，内容是否完整。(check the theme) 2. 查语法，是否有时态错误，是否有主谓不一致，是否有语态问题，是否有词形错误，是否有不合乎搭配的词组。(check the grammar) ３．查标点，是否有标点错误 (check the punctuation) 4. 查拼写，是否有拼写错误和大小写问题 （check the spelling) 5．查表达，是否有不合乎英语惯用的表达，是否有中国式英语表达。(check the ways of expression) The winter holidays are one of the most exciting days in the year. I did a lot of things this winter holidays. the most unforgetable thing is to make my birthday cake with my mother on my birthday. My mother buy the things we need from the supermarket. We mixed the floor and eggs. Then add some special things to make the cake soft. Finally, we put it into the iron. I shared the cake with my family numbers. It was really delicions. I will never forget that day because I learned to make cakes as well as share my happiness with others. The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays. What do you think of this article? 错误太多 10’ Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. 1. I climed slowly and was very tried. 2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb. climbed tired unforgettable somebody 3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. Spelling（拼写） （others) Friday 4. I can’t forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together. I can’t forget that day because 5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever. ! Capital letter（大小写） Punctuation（标点符号） remember 7. I thought it is hungry. was 8. My grandmother always tidy up my room. tidies 9. How unforgettable this things is! thing Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. Tense（时态） Verb agreement (主谓一致) Word form (词形） With my father’s help, 11. To cut a long story to short, …. To cut a long story short,… 12. I we