2015年中考英语（云南）九年级复习高频话题写作指南：（七上）Starter-Unit4（共15张PPT）.pptVIP

末页 目录 首页 七年级（上）Starter-Unit 4 第三部分 高频话 题写作指南 家庭 写作导图 从云南近四年家庭类相关话题书面表达的命题来看，通常写家庭成员之间的深厚感情，如2011玉溪“我爱我的家人”。 the family family members the story between your families show your love to your family who, look, job, hobby, personality when, how, who, where, your feeling send a gift, write a card/letter, do housework or other things to help them 亮点句型速成 常用句型：You do as I mentioned above. You can get on well with your parents. 推荐句型: →If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents. 常用句型：The person is my mother. 推荐句型: →①The person I love most is my mother. →②The person who often encourages me is my mother. 开头句：The person I love most is.../ I want to introduce...to you. 中间句： 1. She is a woman of medium build with long hair. 2. My mother gets up the earliest in our family. 3. My father is one of my best friends, and I often talk with him if I have any problems. 4. They often encourage me when I’m in trouble. 5. How can I get on well with my brother? 6. My loving grandfather spends most of his free time with me. 结尾句： 1. I love my parents more than anyone else. 2. Thank you for everything you have done for me. （常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（一）个人情况（二）家庭朋友与周围的人） 典例剖析（’11玉溪） 提示：家是一个能让人感到温暖的港湾。在你的成长过程中，家给予了你很多，那么你是否曾用适当的方式对你的家人表达过关爱和回报呢？请以“I　Love My Family”为题，写一篇英语短文，通过记叙一件你为家庭做过的事情来体现你对家人的爱。 要求： 1. 词数不少于60；语言流畅、书写规范、 卷面整洁； 2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3. 不得以单纯介绍家庭成员的方式来撰写。 【审题指导】 1.本篇作文的题材以记叙文为主，记叙自己为家人做过的一件事来体现自己对家人的爱； 2.主要是写事件来表达自己对家人的关爱，不仅仅是介绍家庭成员； 3.叙述家庭基本情况用一般现在时，描写自己做过的事情用一般过去时； 4.词数不少于60，语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。 【高分范文】 I Love My Family I have a happy family. Although my parents are very busy, they try their best to take good care of me. I think I should do something for them. Yesterday was Sunday. I got up e