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“No offense, but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that stuff be outdated” was wrong. The knowledge is wealthy. We must have confident that as long as we learn good, we must look for a good job in the future. confidence Knowledge is wealth. 内容混乱，思路不清晰，陈述不到位。 选词含混不清，无词性、时态区分。 错误频出，三分之二的句子错误。 糊里糊涂 5分作文（4-6分） In this picture, we can see there is a teacher teached students multiplication table, but the students didn’t think it offense in the job market. Advance with the society more and more controversial issues have brought, one of which is teaching, just like the picture, with the developenting society, our teaching must developenting as well, now in the job market, the company request more and more, but our school and college teach too simple. It due to the student can’t find the job in the job market, and they say no offense but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that staff be outdated? Now we must to know student want, that we can make them useful in the job market, then it can solve the issue. In this picture, we can see there is a teacher teached students multiplication table, but the students didn’t think it offense in the job market. Advance with the society more and more controversial issues have brought, one of which is teaching, just like the picture, with the developenting society, our teaching must developenting as well, now in the job market, the company request more and more, but our school and college teach too simple. It due to the student can’t find the job in the job market, and they say no offense but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that staff be outdated? Now we must to know student want, that we can make them useful in the job market, then it can solve the issue. 思路紊乱，条理不清。 语言支离破碎，没有完整的句子。 一塌糊涂 2分作文（1-3分） 基本词汇不扎实，组织语言能力太差。 高分作文亮点句型 1. It is … that …. （强调句） 2. Provided that …… (条件句) 3. Convenient as technology is, basic skills…… (让步状语从句) 4. Only by learning the basic skills well, can