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Structure Introduction, 1-2 sentences, rewrite the question Body1, 1+X sentences, 第一句总体概括，X句具体介绍数字 Body2, 1+X sentences, 第一句总体概括，X句具体介绍数字 Conclusion, 1-2 sentences, 第一句介绍总数（可不写）；第二句做总结。 Introduction 1 or 2 sentences Rewrite the question Add words, delete words and change words Present Simple The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Rewrite words show = describe/ summarise/ outline/ indicate proportion = percentage categories = kinds, types families = households families living in poverty = poor families men and women = males and females population = people three different countries 后面加上短横线再加上三个国名：Japan， Sweden and the USA Body 1+X 句型 第一句概括本段总体趋势或者概由几个部分组成 X 表示介绍数据（2个要点） 尽可能按照顺序 取舍数字原则 注意时态 Sample Question The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status in March, 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Introduction The bar chart indicates the data of leisure time enjoyed by males and females of different job status in the month of march, 2002. 1+X Structure We can see from the bar chart that in the employed full-time, unemployed and retired groups, men enjoyed more leisure time than women. Specially, men employed full-time had 48 hours of leisure time while their female counterparts only enjoyed 38 hours. In the employed group, men enjoyed 85 hours of leisure time whilst ladies only had 75. In the retired category, males had 83 hours of leisure time whereas female retirees had less than 75. 1+X Structure According to the bar chart, in the employed part-time and housewife groups, only figures about women are given. More precisely, female part-timers and housewives had 39 and 52 hours of leisure time, respectively. Conclusion（optional） 结论只要是根据图的数据得出的合理规律就可以，并不是只有一个固定答案。 第一句写总数，第二句写结论。 结尾句结论的时态也是由题目的时间决定。 Sample Conclusion Therefore