雅思写作语言.pptVIP

雅思大作文 张竹君 目录 一. 重述语意的技巧 二. 句型的多样化 三. 模板法：过渡与衔接 重述语意的技巧—— 绝不重复使用同一个词,除非万不得已！ 　　1.使用同义词进行替换: 　　用wants\hopes\expects\ anticipates替换wishes; 　　用impact\effect替换influence; 　　用corporation\business \firm\ enterprise 替换company; 　　用establish\ construct替换build; 　　用drawbacks\weaknesses\defects\ shortcomings替换disadvantages; 　　用merits\strengths＼virtues\ benefits替换advantages; 　　用choose\advocate\ favor\ prefer替换support。 　　 重述语意的技巧—— 绝不重复使用同一个词,除非万不得已！ 　　2.使用各种形式的同根词进行替换。 　　用announcement替换announce; 　　用building替换build; 　　用discussion替换discuss; 　　用advantageous 替换advantage 　　用disadvantageous替换 disadvantage 　　用opposition替换oppose; 　　用explanation替换 explain; 等等。 　　 重述语意的技巧—— 绝不重复使用同一个词,除非万不得已！ 3.使用短语进行替换。 　　用set up替换build; 　　用argue for\vote for\be in favor of\ be supportive of \approve of 替换support; 　　用argue against\vote against\ object to\be opposed to替换oppose; 　　用positive\ good\ favorable\ beneficial\ helpful\ valuable\ desirable points\ aspects替换advantages； 用negative\ devastating\ damaging\ bad\ harmful\ destructive\ catastrophic points\ aspects\ respects替换disadvantages; 等等。 重述语意的技巧—— 绝不重复使用同一个词,除非万不得已！ 　 4.使用全新的表达法进行替换。 可以用A large factory is supposed to be built near the community according to the announcement issued by a company.替换 A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near the community; 　　用 There is a growing awareness of both the positive and negative influences that the construction plan brings to our community.替换Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.;等等。 重述语意的技巧—— 绝不重复使用同一个词,除非万不得已！ Example: 我决不嫁给你. I will never marry you. Never will I marry you. If you were the last man in the world, I would definitely remain single. You are the last man I am willing to marry. If you were to marry me, I would go to the temple. If the sun rose in the west, I would marry you. I will marry anybody but you. I can suffer anything but marrying you. If you were to marry me, I would jump into the water \river \lake\sea\well