中考英语写作3教案.ppt

高考总复习——书面表达训练 主要特点 能力要求 主要问题 书面表达经典示例 假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。　1、目击者应该准确报告事实；?? 2、词数100左右；?? 3、结尾已为你写好。 _________________________________________　　About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li Hua 附图 小结 审题，抓点 造句，成文 改错，誉写 * * 记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明 要点不全 线索不清 原因：步骤不对 1 2 3 4 年轻妇女 颜色：黄 AC864 ①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. ③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. ④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit him hard. ⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didnt. ⑥Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. ⑦Fortunately, I wrote down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. ⑧After that, I went over to check out the old man. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua * * * *