高三英语段写作方略复习课件1.pptVIP

* * 佳作赏析议论文——事实讲述类 (2010·江西高考) 英语中“please”、“thank you”、“sorry”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊、改善关系、化解矛盾等神奇的力量，因而被称为“magic words”。请以“Magic Power of Polite Words”为题写一篇100词左右的英语作文。体裁不限(叙述文、议论文、说明文……)。 ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ 上一页 1．话题特点：事实讲述类的议论文就是通过语言或文字，对某一社会现象进行议论，或对所读的材料进行评析，从而提出自己的独到见解，以阐述事物的道理，明确表露作者的思想观点。 2．写好这类作文要注意： (1)这类作文的特点。要有明确的观点，通过一些社会经历和现象，列举足够的论据，使用正确的时态和语态。 (2)详略得当。内容重在陈述，坚持摆事实，讲道理。 (3)写作内容：阐明观点或提出问题——摆出事实和理由加以论述——得出结论。 上一页 3．常用的句式表达： 开头：No one can deny that... It is often said that... As everyone knows，... It is well known that ...has created certain problems for the society today. 论证或承接：It has been reported /found/estimated that... There are many examples to show that... A number of factors will account for ... 结尾：The best way to solve the problem is ... In addition to /Apart from this, another way to solve the problem of ...is ... Our government should make stricter rules to... It is high time we took proper steps/actions to the terrible situation. 上一页 More and more people attach great importance to relationship in career success.Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationship among friends.Polite words can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life. Always saying “please” and “thank you” will make your friends feel more comfortable and more willing to offer help when necessary.We all know that one mans success is based on how he deals with people.Always be grateful to other peoples kindness and show your gratitude through the words you speak.The more support you win from other people, the faster you will move towards your goal. Remember, being polite costs nothing but it is worth of million dollars. 上一页 本文一开始就使用了一个非常好的句型“attach...to...”，体现了良好的语言功底，抓住了读者的注意力，有了一个良好的开端；词汇、短语、句式丰富多变；非谓语动词结构使用非常准确，出现了“when necessary”省略结构，develop/base/grateful 等词汇的使用简洁合理，用到了定语从句结构，yet/and/but等连词使文章连贯通顺，“the more..., the faster...”