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北京市海淀区高一英语期末试题 第二节、书面表达（满分15分） 云雾山是一处旅游胜地，每日有大量游客。几年前少数游客不注意保护环境。现在大有改观。请你根据以下要点写一篇作文。 注意： 1. 开头以为你写好。 2. 字数：120字左右 The Yunwu Mountain is a place of interest. 分析题目： 审题-审文体、人称、时态、内容、结构、词数 本文为记叙文，写事为主，第三人称，一般过去时和一般现在时搭配，内容是几年前少数游客在观赏云雾上时的行为和现在游客的表现，结构上分为两大部分：过去和现在；详略安排上，两部分平均分配；100-140。 要点思考： 每日有大量游客 There are many tourists every day. Every day crowds of/ large numbers of tourists come (to visit) here. 几年前少数游客不注意保护环境 Several years ago, a few visitors didn’t pay any attention to protecting the environment here. … to environmental protection take no notice of/ paid no attention to 乱扔废纸、塑料袋、罐头盒 In the past, they threw away waste paper, plastic bags, and cans/ tins. 杀害动物、捕捉飞鸟 They killed/ hunted animals and caught birds. 砍伐树木、采摘花草 They cut down trees and picked up flowers. 在丛林中生火烧饭 They lit a fire and cooked meals in the forest. They made a fire to in order to cool meals in the forest. 现在的游客带走垃圾 “在这吃还是带走”for here or to go/ eat here or take away? Nowadays, the tourists will take away the rubbish/ garbage/ trash with them. 不再打猎 They no longer hunt animals. 爱护动物 They begin to take good care of/ cherish the animals. 自带午餐，以防森林火灾 They take lunch by themselves in order not to cause forest fire. … to prevent forest fire. 没有任何调整，这些只是散乱的句子；只有意思通顺、语义连贯才能称得上是文章 Every day, lots of tourists come here. Several years ago, a few visitors didn’t pay much attention to the environmental protection and made a lot of mistakes. Some people used to throw waste paper, plastic bags, and cans everywhere. Others would pick up the flowers, cut down trees and even cook meals over an open fire. This was rather dangerous. Worst of all, they killed animals and caught birds, the number of which reduced quickly at that time. However, things have changed a lot nowadays. Many visitors bring lunch with them, and take the rubbish away, and this will surely help prevent forest fires. They no longer go hunting, and on the contrary, they attach more love and care to the animals. It’