翻译范文 冬日漫步.ppt

A Winter Walk (excerpts) 冬日漫步（节选） Henry David Thoreau Famous writer philosopher Master piece: Walden Lake Affection on nature The wind has gently murmured through the blinds, or puffed with feathery softness against the windows, and occasionally sighed like a summer zephyr lifting the leaves along, the livelong night. 寒风私语，轻透帘席，柔若翎羽，微拂窗棂；偶如低叹，似夏之风，抚动细叶, 长夜不休。 The wind has gently murmured through the blinds, or puffed with feathery softness against the windows, and occasionally sighed like a summer zephyr lifting the leaves along, the livelong night. 寒风私语，轻透帘席，柔若翎羽，微拂窗棂； 偶如低叹，似夏之风，抚动细叶， 长夜不休。 技术要点： 1.主题关联性增译：文章主题是冬日漫步，既然季节是冬，那么风应该是寒冷的，故把the wind译成 “寒风”，贴合主题，且使译文更优美。 2.语义嬗变：puff→微拂 参数因子：gently， feathery softness puff： 1.to blow in short sudden gust of wind 2.To emit puffs 短促而有力地吹? 喷？ 微拂！ lift: move sth. to another position, especially upwards. 抬起？ 吹起？ 抚动！ The earth itself has slept, as it were its first, not its last sleep, save when some street-sign or wood-house door has faintly creaked upon its hinge, cheering forlorn nature at her midnight work, —the only sound awake twixt Venus and Mars, —advertising us of a remote inward warmth, a divine cheer and fellowship, where gods are met together, but where it is very bleak for men to stand. 大地已酣然入睡，此非长眠，乃年中初次休憩。夜半虽至， 大自然仍辛勤不休，唯有街上招牌和木屋门轴时而吱吱作响，虽极细极微，但亦是孤寂大自然的唯一抚慰。这是金星与火星间唯一清醒着的天籁，唤醒了我们灵魂深处的温情，神圣的愉悦感和友情。那是诸神际会之时方能体会的境界，然而对世间凡人，此番寂寥，却是难以消受。 ? The earth itself has slept, as it were its first, not its last sleep, save when some street-sign or wood-house door has faintly creaked upon its hinge, cheering forlorn nature at her midnight work, —the only sound awake twixt Venus and Mars,—advertising us of a remote inward warmth, a divine cheer and fellowship, where gods are met together, but where it is very bleak for men to stand. 大地已酣然入睡，此非长眠，乃年中初次休憩。夜半虽至， 大自然仍 辛勤不休，唯有街上招牌和木屋门轴时而吱吱作响，虽极细极微，但 亦是孤寂大自然的唯一抚慰。这是金星与火星间唯一清醒着的天籁， 唤醒了我们灵魂深处的温情，神圣的愉悦感和友情。那是诸神际会之时