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英语写作 词汇,句型 , 语法多样化 　 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 写好结构 三段或四段 首尾段写好 注意：写得很一般的句子不要独立成段！ 如何写好句子 用高级结构！ 从句、非谓语、倒装、强调、高级词汇 There are many visitors enjoy  the dish. →There are many visitors who  enjoy the dish. 1.句子要正确 2.句子要平行 In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. →In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. 3.句子要连贯 Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. →After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. 4.句子要有逻辑性 I’m very interested in computer and won first prize last year. →I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year. 5.句子要避免过多重复. You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake. →After walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill, walk round to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake. 6.句子要避免头重脚轻Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects. →The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. 7.句子要避免汉式英语My spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to popular music. →In my spare time, I’m fond of swimming,…… →In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating…… →In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating…… 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气） On his arriving, please give me an e-mail. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式 Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspape