雅思写作增强语句表现力的技巧-小马留学网.docx

智课网IELTS备考资料 雅思写作增强语句表现力的技巧-小马留学网 摘要： 一、避免使用语意弱的be动词。雅思写作技巧 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如： Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a  一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。 雅思 写作技巧  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：  Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)  Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)  2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如： 雅思写作 技巧  1) Weak: The team members are good players.  Revision: The team members play well.  2) Weak: One workers plan is the elimination of tardiness.  Revision: One workers plan eliminates tardiness.  3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：雅思写作技巧  1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.  Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.  2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.  Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.  二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：  1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.  Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.雅思写作技巧  2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.  Better: She compares prices and quality.  三、尽量运用主动语态。例如：  1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.  Better: Charity has supported the organization.雅思写作技巧  2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.  Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.  四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如：  1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.  Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.  2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.雅思写作技巧  Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.  3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday