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This is the only hometown that she remembered. 这是唯一的家乡她能记得的。 By the end of the 19th century, people could travel by train to most parts of Britain.到十九世纪的末期为止，人们能够用火车旅行到不列颠的大部分。 “word-for-word translation”/“dead translation” and literal translation she could not desert Tara; she belonged to the red acres far more than they could ever belong to her. (Gone with the wind) 她不能放弃塔拉；她属于这些红土地，远比它们属于她更加真实。 她不能放弃塔拉；这块红土地是属于她的，而她更是永远属于这块红土地。 立足于句 放眼语篇 立足于句 充分尊重原文的意义推进方式（尽量遵循原文的句法结构，但对于又长又复杂“对译”后让人费解的句子，可变通） Talent Professor Smith has. Money Professor Smith has not. 复杂句翻译诀窍： 摸清时空关系 摸清逻辑关系 It was late and every one had left the café except an old man who sat in the shadow the leaves of the tree made against the electric light. Analyze and compare the following translations 1.夜深了，顾客都离开了小餐馆，只有一个老人（只剩老人一个）还坐在被枝叶挡住了灯光的树荫里。 2.夜深了，顾客都离开了小餐馆，除了一个坐在树叶挡住灯光所形成的树荫处的老人。 3.夜深了，在灯光的照射下，树影婆娑。顾客都离开了小餐馆，只有一个老人还坐在树影里。 4.现在已经很晚了，除了一位年迈的老人坐在斑驳的树影中，所有人都已离开了咖啡馆。 The two waiters inside the café knew that the old man was a little drunk, and while he was a good client they knew that if he became too drunk he would leave without paying, so they kept watch on him. 1.餐馆里的两位侍者知道老人有些醉了。虽是诚实的顾客，他们知道要是大醉了，他仍有可能不付酒钱就走掉，所以都留意着他。 2.两位侍者在餐厅里，他们知道老人已有些醉了。他倒是诚实的顾客，可他们明白他要是大醉了，也会不付酒钱就走掉，所以都注意着他。 3.餐馆里的两位侍者知道老人有些醉了。然而他是诚实的顾客，他们知道要是大醉了，他仍有可能不付酒钱就走掉，所以都留意着他。 放眼语篇 衔接cohesion 连贯coherence No Context No Text This kind of wood works easily. 这种木料容易加工。 “work” 含义很广，但根据这里的语境，译为“加工”较合适，可与“木料”一词搭配。再如：“The machine works well.” 译为“机器运转得很好。” Mrs. Crane, the Spanish teacher, is a senior citizen. Surprisingly, the senior consultant came to see if she was ready to return to her ward. The President made him his special envoy. The coffee is made. He made his Queen of Hearts. He has made many friends since he came to the school. I make the distance about 10 kilometers. The movie made that director. He made general after a few months. I’ll make you an offer of 10000RMB He made Beijing by 2:00 p.m. What make is your watch?