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　 　　 写英文求助信 太原市小店一中 闫丽忠 2015 　1．正确把握时态，保证语言准确性 　　写英文求助信的原因就是目前自己在某一角度存在困难，因此应用一般现在时表达文意，当然描绘自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时表达文意。 2．熟悉常用句型，提高文章整体美感 三段式结构 1. My name is . . I’m writing to you for some help. 2. As a …, I’m writing a letter to you to get some help. 3. I am writing to you, on behalf of ……, to ask for help for …. 4. I’m a … . Now I have a problem, which always troubles me a lot, so I want to ask you for help. 3. 贴切使用过渡性词汇，提高文章逻辑性 　　列举自己所碰到的困难时可用 first, besides, what’s more， what’s worst, 等过渡性词汇。请求对方提供一系列帮助时可用in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过渡性词汇。这些过渡性词汇是英文求助信特色过渡性词汇，应增强使用意识，养成使用习惯。 　　 4．适当使用高级表达方式，提高文章表达档次 表达“面临巨大困难，所以只好求助” 时可用现在分词做状语句型Facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. 也可使用过去分词做状语句型Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask for your help. 表达请求对方帮助以便自己能够有所进步时可使用so that或in order that引导的目的状语从句。这个句型非常好，有很大的表达容量，它既可表达求助内容，又能表达对方实施帮助后的作用，可谓一举两得。但必须注意的是，仅仅懂得这一点还不够，同学们一定要下定决心，强化意识，非把这一句型用上去不可。 假如你是李华，你正在英国留学，2012年三月四日五日你参加了“伦敦两日游”，回来后，你发现你将你的一个手提包忘在了旅游的大巴车上，可是你忘记了车牌号。请你给旅行社发一封电子邮件，请他们帮你找一下。内容要点包括：1.旅游的日期。 2.大巴车的描述。3.手提包的描述。 4.你的联系方式。注意：词数：100字左右。提示词：手提包handbag；大巴车coach; 车牌号：plate number 主要出现的问题： 1.要点缺失 2.未用提示词 3.时态混乱 4.词汇误用 5.句型单一 6.连接词句缺乏 Correcting: I joined a two-day tour of London. (took part in/ participated in) Unfortunately, I left my handbag in the coach. I went there by yellow coach. My handbag is in yellow, containing some souvenirs, my ID card, passport and some money. Please connect me if you have any informations. My telephone number is xxx. I would be appreciate it if you can help me. 正确的要点呈现：1. 2012年三月四日你参加了“伦敦两日游” I took part in a two-day tour of London organized by your travel agency from March 4th to March 5th , during which time I really enjoyed myself. 2.回来后，你发现你将你的一个手提包忘在了旅游的大巴车上，可是你忘记了车牌号。 1)When I came back, I found I had left my handbag on one of your coaches. B