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学号：1040304210 姓名：朱敏莹 班级：国贸全英2班 得分：75.1 =点击调整评语和分数 标题：Food and Health As we all know, good health is important in our daily life. Every day we get many information about food and health. We should clearly find out what we can eat. After I watched the video, what impressed me the most is that having a good diet and much good bacteria can improve our health. Generally speaking, cellulose will promote to digest. It’s good for our body to metabolize. So in our daily diet, we should eat more food containing lots of fiber like fruits and vegetables. From the researching of experts, healthy diet can decrease the probability of cancer and keep fit. In addition, beneficial bacteria can help people release the bad gas which it is in our bodies. Experts say we can encourage growth of the good bacteria through diet. Thus, in my opinion, we can eat dandelion leaves, onion，banana, especially yoga. In occlusion, every one should pay attention to your diet and health. One important thing is health can be meliorate by food. As a result, Its necessary for us to have healthy eating habits. 评语: Good job. Your essay has some minor problems in accuracy but it is still mostly readable. Youve succeeded with flying colors in structure and vocabulary. Its evident that you have covered the points required in your writing and showed strong writing skill. 学号：1040304232 姓名：周倩仪 班级：10级国际经济与贸易全英2班 得分：75.7 =点击调整评语和分数 标题：Food and Health My attitude towards food and health was transformed greatly after watching this clip. The fourth part of the clip which reveals the process of breaking wind interests me the most. Generally, people get embarrassed easily when talking about breaking wind while this should have been regarded as a normal physical human thing. Gas is a natural by-product of the food we eat. A study showed in the clip settled a question: whether or not men produce more gas than women. Actually it’s natural for both men