专四写作技巧之二段落要求.ppt

Writing of TEM-4 Writing of Paragraphs TEM-4的段落要求 1. 一致性 2. 发展性 3. 层次性 4. 连贯性 TEM-4的段落要求---一致性 Sample 1: (1) Some people say that love makes the world go round. (2) Others of a less romantic and more practical turn of mind say that it isn’t love; it’s money. (3) But the truth is that it is energy that makes the world go round. (4) Energy is the currency of the ecological system and life becomes possible only when food is converted into energy, which in turn is used to seek more food to grow, to reproduce and to survive. (5) On this cycle all life depends. Sample 2 (1) My favorite reading material is science fiction because I enjoy using my imagination. (2) When I involve myself in fantastic situation in the distant future, my mind seems to open up, and I feel more alive; my imagination is full of spaceships, time warps, anti-matter, and black holes. (3) Maybe that is why I am doing so poor in my school work. (4) I simply hate to read dry, technical prose-you know, the kind you find in your text books. (5) My teacher thinks that I am lazy, and some think my speculations are idle daydreams. (6) I know that scientific and technical progress is made by people who dream and imagine and speculate– who live at least a part of their lives in the future. (7) That is why I recommend science fiction to any one interested in his or her creative abilities. Sample 3 … The second reason for keeping a good mood is that it can make us live a happy life. Why are people busy with working or studying? Because they want to earn more money and get better position to live a happy life. However, why not forget the pressure of that and just live a happy life? TEM-4的段落要求---发展性 发展性 Sample 1 From my point of view, the new library is quite excellent as regards the scale and the structure. However, there are still some serious problems in it. What comes first is the sheer volume of books and the variety of magazines. Many of us complain that there are not enough books for us