高三书面表达之围绕要点扩充细节.pptVIP

上节作文回顾 假如今年暑假你在乡下度过了一个有意义的假期，请根据以下要点下一篇短文，介绍你的暑假生活。 1. 帮助祖父母干农活； 2. 有时去村西的小河游泳； 3. 帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。 词数100左右；可适当补充细节以使行文连贯。 学生习作 This summer holiday, I spent a meaningful holiday in my grandparents’. First of all, I helped my grandparents to do farm work. Sometimes, I went swimming in the river west of the village. I also spent some time helping neighbors’ children learn English. So I have a meaningful summer holiday. 学生习作 I had an unforgettable holiday this summer. First, I helped my grandparents with work in the field. It left a deep impression on me. At the same time, I realized that the farmers are hard. Sometimes, we went swimming in the river to the west of the village, and we caught a lot of fish. Suddenly, the dark clouds gathered and it rained heavily. We hurriedly ran up to our house. Although we were wet through, we still enjoyed ourselves. Then, I also helped neighbors’ children with English . I believe this is the best holiday of mine. 学生习作 This summer holiday, I spent a meaningful holiday in my grandparents’. First of all, I helped my grandparents to do farm work. Sometimes, I went swimming in the river west of the village. I also spent some time helping neighbors’ children learn English. So I have a meaningful summer holiday. 要点齐全，语言正确，51字 学生习作 I had an unforgettable holiday this summer. First, I helped my grandparents with work in the field. It left a deep impression on me. At the same time, I realized that the farmers are hard. Sometimes, we went swimming in the river to the west of the village, and we caught a lot of fish. Suddenly, the dark clouds gathered and it rained heavily. We hurriedly ran up to our house. Although we were wet through, we still enjoyed ourselves. Then, I also helped neighbors’ children with English . I believe this is the best holiday of mine. 要点齐全，语言基本正确，102字，但偏离要点 书面表达六步法： 1 认真审题，看好提示 2 抓内容要点 3 组词成句子 4 适当扩充细节： 增加地点 增加时间 发散思维 5 连接成文 6 抄写 4 适当增加细节： 增加时间 e.g. 外出购物 I