2009高考英语写作预测系列讲座（二）健康生活.docVIP

2009高考英语写作预测系列讲座（二） 健康生活 本讲座是让你写一篇关于健康生活的文章，介绍如何才能保持健康的生活。根据写作要求，首先你需要认真审题，确定文章的体裁，时态和段落。然后，你要列出提纲，注意要点要全。最后，适当扩充要点，形成一篇完整的文章。 写作指导： 一：审题 本文的体裁属议论文，应以一般现在时为主，三段式为宜，人称以第二人称为好。第一段简述健康生活的重要作用，引出话题。第二段给出健康生活的三条建议。第三段总结概括。 二：列提纲 Outline of the passage: HEALTHY LIVING Paragraph 1 to put forward three pieces of advice to keep healthy Paragraph 2 to list the advice：good foods，enough sleep，plenty of exercise （key words:good diet, avoid, eat more, overweight,enough sleep, feel tired, plenty of exercise, strong and fit,improves,helps） Paragraph 3 to conclude the passage 三: 所涉及到本单元的词汇和短语。 diet, fit, normal, overweight，fat, anxious，take exercise 四:扩充要点,连词成句。 学生习作 Healthy living Good health is the most valuable thing a person can have.To keep health①, you must eat the right foods ,get enough sleep ,and have normal exercise. Good② diet is very important for good health.Avoid foods with too many③ sugar and fat. Eat more high-protein foods,vegetables,and fruits. Remember you are what you eat. Eat④ too much food can easily lead to overweight. Enough sleep is also important.You must get 8 or 9 hours of sleep every night.Without enough sleep ,you will feel tired and sometime⑤anxious. Please make sure that you have enough sleep every day. Finally,take normal exercise every day.Exercise help ⑥you fight against diseases and lose weigh-----makingyou strong and fit.Walking running,swimming,bicycling,basketball,tabletennis are all good exercises. If you can do like ⑦the above, you are sure to enjoy a healthy living and stay in good conditions⑧ all your life. 教师点评 作者首先指明健康的意义，然后从饮食、休息、和锻炼三个方面介绍了健康生活的具体途径，最后总结全文得出结论，层次分明，条理清晰。谚语、短语和高级词汇的使用为文章增色不少如normal,remember you are what you eat,lead to等等。当然文章中也存在一些需要改进的地方，建议修改如下： ① 把health改为healthy。keep为系动词，后接形容词 ② Good的前面加A，并把good 改为小写。 ③ 把many改为much。sugar 为不可数名词。 ④ 把Eat改为Eating。eating 为动名词作主语。 ⑤ 把sometime改为sometimes。sometimes意思为“有时”。 ⑥ 把help改为helps。 ⑦ 把like改为as。as意思为“按照”。 ⑧ 把conditions改为 condition。in good condition 为介词短语意思为“状态良好”。 【范文】 Heal