将稻香溶入书声.pptVIP

标 题 * * 将稻香溶入书声 ——沈阳建筑大学校园环境设计 俞孔坚 韩毅 韩晓晔 Let the Sound of Reading Dissolved in the Fragrance of Rice ——Campus Landscape Design of Shenyang Architectural University 将稻香溶入书声 ——沈阳建筑大学校园环境设计 摘要： 这是一个用水稻、作物和当地野草等最经济的元素来营造校园环境的案例；试图对庄稼、野草和校园做一个重新的认识，让学生在一个现代城市环境中学习书本知识的同时感受自然的过程、四时的演变、作物的春秋和民以食为天的道理。 并通过旧材料的再利用感受历史的延续。 Abstract: The utterly new campus landscape of Shenyang Architectural University was designed with rice and native crops and plants. By doing this, the campus became a unique environment for the students to learn not only from the book, but from the nature and agriculture. Materials and trees from the old campus were reused in this new campus. The natural and agricultural processes and the process of history become part of the studying of the students. REVISE 1. 标题：将稻香溶入书声…… Let the Sound of Reading Dissolved in the Fragrance of Rice … dissolve意为“溶解”，但此处指稻香书声相得益彰，用“融合”更为贴切，故建议改用integrate。 Let the Fragrance of Rice Integrate with the Sound of Reading … REVISE 2. The utterly new campus landscape of Shenyang Architectural University was designed with rice and native crops and plants. 第一个and显得多余，可删去。 The utterly new campus landscape of Shenyang Architectural University was designed with rice ， native crops and plants. The natural and agricultural processes and the process of history become part of the studying of the students. 3. process指抽象的过程，应是不可数的，不用加es。 4. process意为“过程”，并无延续的意思，建议改为extention。 The natural and agricultural process and the extention of history become part of the studying of the students. REVISE Let the Fragrance of Rice Integrate with the Sound of Reading ——Campus Landscape Design of Shenyang Architectural University Abstract: The utterly new campus landscape of Shenyang Architectural University was designed with rice ， native crops and plants. By doing this, the campus became a unique environment for the students to learn not only from the book, but from the nature and agriculture. Materi