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风景话题作文800字高中 如何描写一个城市 〖案例呈现〗 罗马是意大利的首都，也是一个充满传奇色彩的色彩城市，每年吸引着世界各地的大批 注意：1.词数：120左右 2.不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 〖写作指导〗 1.审题与定调 本文属于介绍城市的说明文。介绍城市的说明文一般介绍其他位置、面积、人口、经济地位、历史、文化、交通自然资源及人文景观等，同时要突出城市特色进行描写，不要面面俱到。组织这样的文章要注意安排说明的顺序，使文章错落有致。短文以第三人称，一般现在时态为主。 2.确定主题内容 该短文根据表格提示要点，应从地理位置、人口、面积、历史、功能、景点入手介绍罗马基本情况。 3. 点等。 4. ? *...is in/on/to the west/north/south of... * ...lies/is located/situated near/behind/in front of/by the side of/among... 审定篇章结构 第一段：交代罗马的地理位置、面积、历史、人口等情况。 第二段：突出罗马特色描写，如城市功能、城市的历史地位、历史景第三段：简单评论总结全文。 常用表达（useful expressions） 描述位置（location）及周边环境（surroundings） *standing on the top of the mountain,...has experienced many changes. *in the west of the city stands... *surrounded by mountains on three sides,...faces...in the east *built on seven hills, it looks like ... ?描述人口（population）及面积（area） *...has a population of... *...is a...city,with a population of... *...covers an area of... *it is an ancient city, with an area of... *...is...meters long and...meters wide ?描述历史遗迹（historic relics）及名胜（places of interest） *...has a history of over...years *...is the capital of...with a long history *...be famous/well-known for... *there are many places of interest, such as... *...is the biggest city, which has many interest/historical sites ④描述其 （weather,transportation,industry,agriculture,natural resources...） *it is warm in winter and cool in summer. places of 他 *the transportation is convenient. *it is the center of heavy/light industry. *the region is rich in natural resources. *it is the center of culture,education,business and trade. 〖范文赏析〗 rome, the capital of italy, is located in the middle of italy, with a history of over 2,500 years. it covers an area of about 1,500 square kilometers and has a population of about 3 million . built on seven hills, it is the largest and most populated city in italy. rome now serves as italy?s political, historical and cultural center. besides, as the bir