2013年7月6日雅思写作分析与范文参考.docVIP

2013年7月6日雅思写作分析与范文参考? 小作文: 比较2000年到2007年waste not recycle和recycle区别 写作策略：动态图，按时间顺序写。先写总量，然后一段recycled，一段not recycled。大作文： Space travel has been possible for some time and some people think the space tourism could be developed in the future. To what extent do you think its a positive or negative development？?提纲： Positive Negative Economic Broaden horizon Private experiments Body +psychology environment American, Russia and my country China have successfully sent their astronauts to the outer space. Inspired by space technology, some wealthy ambitious explorers have extended their sight beyond the earth. While the idea of commercial space flight is being conceived by some pioneer organizations, some concerns are raised in terms of the adverse effects on human body and the environment. （非谓语，平行句型） Surely orbit flight is an exciting and worthwhile experience. The breath taking view of our blue Earth from the space, the non-twinkling starts hanging on the dark endless outer space background and walking in the space of microgravity definitely would expand their horizon and impress the participants for life. The most important drive behind this enthusiasm for space tourism should be the potential billion dollar business. Such a trip can cost 20 million dollars for each person now, but the price is expected to decline gradually with the advance of aviation technology, hoping to attract wider spectrum of class groups. Therefore prosperity in space tourism is being predicted in future decades by some optimists. （转折句，非谓语，现在进行时的被动句） However, cautious optimism is another attitude towards this prospect. Scientists are concerned about the impact on the environment of launching a rocket, which emits much larger amount of carbon than any other transportation on the earth, accelerating global warming. In addition, safety and health issues have to be considered. It has obviously been noticed that astronauts living long term in weightlessness are confronted with physical deterioration