Unit 1 6 Writing.pptVIP

Unit 1 范文赏析 P16 作文题目 【写作内容】 请就“实现梦想”这一主题发表你的看法，内容包括： 1. 你的梦想及榜样； 2. 你为什么选择他/她作为你的榜样？ 3. 要为了实现梦想，你需要怎么做？ 【写作要求】 1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 When?I?was?a?naughty?boy,?may?be?because?of?the?influence?of?the?film.Xiao?Bing?Zhang?Ga,my?dream?was?to?be?a?soldier?just?like?Zhang?Ga.?I?thought?if?I?was?a?soldier,?I?should?be?able?to?swim,?dive?and?climb?trees?as?he?did.?It?seemed?to?be?very?wonderful.?So?I?began?to?learn?swimming,?diving?and?climbing?trees.?I?practiced?every?day?and?finally?I?could?do?them?well.?But?when?I?entered?junior?high?school?and?had?the?military?training.?I?suddenly?found?that?being?a?soldier?was?very?difficult?and?I?wasnt?strong?enough?to?bear?it?.?I?had?to?give?my?dream?up.?? ?But?I?wasnt?discouraged,?and?I?had?new?aim,?which?was?to?be?a?postman,?or?rather?to?be?a?newspaper?boy.?As?a?newspaper?boy.?I?could?speed?along?streets?on?a?bike?and?throw?newspapers?onto?every?porch.?Thats?also?very?cool.?So?I?started?learning?to?ride?a?bicycle.?After?the?everyday?practice,?I?could?go?very?fast?by?bicycle.?But?to?my?disappointment,?the?job?which?I?wanted?only?existed?in?western?counties?not?in?China,?because?there?was?no?porch?in?China.?And?Chinese?postmen?had?to?stuff?very?thick?newspapers?into?very?small?mailboxes?from?very?narrow?entrances.?The?job?was?far?from?what?I?had?expected.?So?once?again?my?dream?fell?through.???Perhaps?you?have?had?the?same?experience?as?I?and?most?of?your?dreams?haven＇t?come?true?yet.?But?I?think?it?doesn＇t?matter,?because?if?you?have?a?dream,?you＇ll?make?many?efforts?to?realize?it.?This?course?is?really?important.?If?I?hadn＇t?dreamt?of?being?a?soldier?or?a?newspaper?boy.?I?wouldn＇t?have?learned?to?swim,?to?dive,?to?climb?trees?or?to?ride?a?bicycle.?Even?if?our?dream?can＇t?come?true,?you＇ll?learn?much?from?the?efforts?you?have?made.?So?what?I?want?to?tell?us?is?that?dream?helps?us?to?grow?up?and?teaches?us?how?to?control?our?lives?.?It?is?dream?that?gives?us?power?and?makes?our?lives?color