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英语专四专八写作怎样使句子多样化 一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外，词汇的运用和句子的处理，也起着决定性作用。句子可长可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句，文章必定很单调乏 味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句，读起来也很费力。 最好的方法是以简单句为基础，配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短，通常要加些附属成分，如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词 短语，以及节缩成分。总之，作者可根据情况，使句子多样化，使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样，但 是句式不同，内容重点也有些差别： 1 The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. 并列分句 1 +2 2 Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. 现在分语短语+简单句 3 In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. 副词短语+并列分句 1 - 2 4 There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. 简单句+形容语短语 5 As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. 原因副词从句+主句 6 The young pilot was on his first overseas training. 7 He felt very uneasy. a The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. b The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. c The young pilot’s first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. d Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training. e The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. f It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. g Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. h The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy. i The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. j When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. k As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. l The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy. 在上述12个句子中， a - g 是简单句； h 是并列句； i - l 是复杂句。简单句除 b 和 g 之外， 其他五样，用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句，尤其是 j 和 k 这两款；接着便是并列句 h 。如果 大多数人的句子只限于 b , g , h , j 和 k 这五种，而其他的则弃如敝屣，不是很可惜吗？ 增强英语语句表现力的有效方法 一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如： Weak: The trees are