《伟大的道路》张培基中译英回译.docVIP

汉译英（回译）——《伟大的道路》张培基《英汉翻译教程》275 1周他们看到的是一个身材瘦长、比普通人略高一点的人，两眼闪着光辉，面貌很引人注意，称得上清秀。可是，那是个男子汉的面庞，严肃而聪颖，朱德看他大概是二十五六岁的年龄。周举止优雅，待人体贴，在欢迎来客招呼他们坐下，并询问有何见教的时候，甚至还有些腼腆。朱顾不得拉过来的椅子，端端正正站在这个比他年轻十岁的青年面前，用平稳的语调，说明自己的身份和经历：他怎样逃出云南，怎样会见孙中山，怎样在上海被陈独秀拒绝，怎样为了寻求自己的新的生活方式和中国新的革命道路而来到欧洲。他要求加入中共在柏林的党组织，一定会努力学习和工作，只要不再回到旧的生活里去——它已经在他的脚底下化为尘埃了，派做什么工作都行。他娓娓而谈，周就站在他面前，习惯侧着头，一直听到朱把话说完，才提出问题。?两位来客经历说完后，周微笑着说，他可以帮他们找到住的地方，替他们办理加入党在柏林的支部的手续，在入党申请书寄到中国而尚未批准之前，暂作候补党员。过了几个月，回信来了，两人都被吸收为正式党员，但朱的党籍对外界保持秘密。? 朱将军解释说，这一措施是必要的，因为他原来是滇军将领，而且资格颇老的国民党员，有朝一日，很可能被共产党派回云南去工作。他虽然没有公开的共产党员身份，朱将军说他已经和过去的许多关系，和旧社会的各个方面都断了联系，“从而卸下了沉重的包袱”。那时，德国有好几百中国留学生，很多是富家子弟，在过去，可能免不了和他们交往。现在他则敬而远之，而和留学生——不少竟年轻到可以他的儿子——在一起如饥似渴的钻研学问。 When the door of Zhou Enlai opened, they saw a man who was slim and a little taller than usual people. His eyes glittered on the attractive face, which matches handsomeness. But that was a masculine face with seriousness and wisdom. Zhu De thought he was about twenty-five or twenty-six. 2Gracefully and considerately, Zhou Enlai welcomed them, treated them to chairs and asked for the reason why they came here, all of which were even tinged with shyness. 3Zhu De couldn’t wait caring about the pulled chair, formally standing in front of the youth who was ten years younger than himself and clarifying his own identification and experiences with stable tone: how did he escape from Yunnan, meet Sun Zhongshan, confront the refusal of Chen Duxiu in Shanghai and then come to Europe for his new lifestyle and Chinese novel revolutionary road. He asked for joining in Chinese Communist Party in Dublin and promised that he would be industrious in study and work. Any job is acceptable if he would never come back to the old life, which had been trampled into ashes under his feet. 4He talked unhurriedly and Zhou Enlai stood just before him, with a head habitually sided. Not until Zhu De finished the talk did he propose any question. 5After the two guests completed their experiences, Zhou Enlai smiled and answered that h